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Mrs. Kelliher
Human Growth and Development
June 10, 2016 
The Secret to Longevity
            Many of us are wondering, what is the secret to a long and healthy life?  There are many genetic and lifestyle factors that may contribute to living a long life.  It seems that individuals who remain active and eat healthfully live longer.  This goes hand in hand with living a healthy and happy lifestyle, which in turn lowers risks for many diseases.    The most common cause of death in the United States that can be changed through lifestyle are poor diet, lack of exercise and smoking. (Nicklett) Therefore, the most important factors in human longevity are diet and exercise,healthy lifestyle choices to prevent disease, staying cognitively active and overall happiness and attitude about one’s life.
Studies show that being active and healthy eating leads to a long life.  One study done in the United States looked at women in their seventies.  (when was this study done?) The study wanted to find a relationship between a high fruit and vegetable diet, regular physical activity and mortality in these women.  They found results from seven hundred and thirteen women.  They asked the women to fill out a questionnaire regarding their physical activity and some agreed to have blood taken to assess blood carotenoid levels.  Carotenoid levels were used to test vegetable and fruit consumption, as this is a component of plants.  The study followed up with these patients after five years.  They found that individuals with high carotenoid levels and higher physical activity levels were more likely to survive in these five years.  Some of the low carotinoid level and low physical activity level individuals had a significantly higher mortality rate.  (Nicklett) This shows that as a person ages, it is still important to exercise and eat well if she wants to live longer and healthier. 
Another study done with middle-aged healthy men as the subjects, examined three things relating to longevity (when was study done?, Where?  And by Whom?).  They looked at smoking, physical fitness and being overweight.  By looking at this variety of subjects, the study found that of non-smokers with high physical fitness, (how do they define “high physical fitness?  Is that exercising every day?  3 times/ day?) nearly 50 percent of them lived to be at least 85 years old.  Only about 28 percent of non-smokers with low physical fitness survived to be at least 85 years old.  This shows that fitness and exercise play a significant role in living longer. (Heir, Erikssen, Sandvik,) 
Making healthy lifestyle choices can help extend the lifespan of an individual. Being overweight or obese can lead to early death.  Overweight individuals increase their chances of getting heart disease, some types of cancers, or diabetes to name a few. (Patel, Hildebrand, Gapstur, 2014) A study that took place in the United States compared body mass index (BMI) to mortality.  BMI is a chart that is used to assess whether or not an individual is of normal weight, overweight, obese, or morbidly obese by comparing height to weight. (Berger, 2008)  This recent study, having been published in October of 2014, analyzed 929,871 black and white men and women living across the United States.   The researchers followed up with the enrolled subjects for 28 years.  The study found that Individuals had a higher risk of mortality being overweight or obese when compared to individuals who were of normal weight. (Patel, Hildebrand, Gapstur)
            Smoking is another lifestyle choice that can most certainly lead to illness and death often at a younger age.  A study done in Norway took a sample of subjects aged from 35 to 49 and placed them in three groups.  The groups were never smokers, former smokers and continuing smokers.  The researchers followed up with deaths of the participants from ages 40 to 70.  They found that about 12 percent of never smokers died within this age range and about 33.5 percent of continuing smokers died.  This shows that there is absolutely and increased risk of death and it is not likely that a person will live an exceptionally long life if he/she smokes.  (Vollset, Tverdal, Gjessing)
            Through research regarding dementia, scientists and psychologists are learning that by keeping a brain actively engaged may help to prevent dementia, or at the very least, delay it.  Although these studies have been largely correlation in nature, adopting practices that engage the brain may be easier to adopt and lead to other benefits that may contribute to a longer, happier life.  As people change, their brains change too.  Sometimes these changes make cognitive functions more difficult, yet by leading an intellectually stimulating lifestyle, an individual can foster cognitive vitality.  Some literature actually suggests that “cognitive stimulation in everyday life can even be an important buffer in delaying onset of Alzheimer's disease or slowing its progression” (Wilson, Bennett, Gilley, Beckett, Barnes, and Evans).   Cognitive practices can be done by individuals on a daily basis.  Older people do not necessarily have to sign up for a “brain” training” course, or go to laboratories to improve their cognitive performance.  Daily practices like focusing and taking the time to remember the five things that are needed at the store rather than writing them on a list.  Going out and learning about new places or meeting new people.  Reading, doing crossword puzzle, or any puzzles, learning a new skill are all simple examples of what people can do as they age to keep their brains sharp. 
            Another way that individuals can improve their cognition is to be social.  Happiness and social interactions are related to living a longer life.  The proverb many of us have heard “laughter is the best medicine” may actually be true.  A study done in the Netherlands used 1,012 elderly individuals from ages 65 to 85 years old.  A questionnaire was used in the study to assess happiness, and the subjects were also interviewed.  The subjects were then divided into three groups. These groups were unhappy, happy or moderately happy.  They were followed up on for 15 years.  The results showed that the unhappy group showed more cases of chronic illnesses.  The unhappy group also participated in less physical activity when compared to the happy group.  These happier individuals also lived longer.  (Koopmans, Geleijnse, Zitman, Giltay)
            Attitude is everything when it comes to longevity.  A person’s attitude about health can impact his/her health.  A study done by the Carnegie Mellon University (2004) did a study with 193 volunteers (ages 19-55) that were given a cold virus and at the same time surveyed about their emotional state.  As the symptoms appeared, tissue from each member was collected and the amount of mucous was measured.  Those members of the study that had positive emotions in the survey had less mucous produced, there was a correlation between the body’s physical response and the attitude that a person had.  The conclusion that professor Sheldon Cohen drew from his research was that those subjects “happy, lively, calm or exhibit other positive emotions are less likely to become ill when they are exposed to a cold virus than those who report few of these emotions.” (Carnegie Mellon University).  So, in turn, those with positive attitudes are less vulnerable to illnesses than those with more a more negative outlook on life.  This conclusion was further elaborate upon in a study done by Stanislav V. Kasl of Yale University in which  “660 elderly people whether they agreed that we become less useful as we age. Those who didn’t agree, and therefore had the most positive attitude about aging, lived an average of 7.5 years longer than those with the most negative attitudes, who did agree that we become less useful as we age.” (Hamilton)
            In conclusion,(don’t use “in conclusion”)  those who maintained a healthy diet and regular exercise lived longer.  Also, smoking and being overweight or obese inherently lessened the length of life through illness.  There is also a lot to be said about happiness and life perspective.  Those who are happy and can accept aging as a positive part of life will live longer than those who are unhappy.  That is why being happy, exercising and eating right, along with making good lifestyle choices will increase your chances of living a longer life. 
           
           
           
         












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